Nov
5th
2023
‘Purpose’ Has Been Posted! · 6:34am Nov 5th, 2023
That’s gotta be the shortest auto-queue time I’ve ever gone through. Well, I’m not complaining. The story is posted! Feel free to give it a read and let me know what you think. I’m quite interested to hear what you all have to say in regards to this one, especially since there’s a lot of original concepts that I put in with regards to our main characters. And yes, since Make Your Mark has moved far beyond this series so far, I want anyone not familiar with the timeline to know that it is an AU. That way so no one calls bs after a certain reveal in the third and fourth chapters, which has already been contradicted by the show proper. But a couple aspects from MYM Chapter 5 have been carried over, which I won’t yet spoil.
Hope y’all enjoy!
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OK.
Having read how F’ed up everything’s gotten, time to wait for months in agony for the finale.
5753758
You read it all this fast?
5753759
Mostly skimming, but yes.
5753760
Nice! I promise waiting for Redeemed won’t take months. In fact, if all goes well, I want to have it in by the time “Secrets of Starlight” drops, so we have two perfectly timed finales. We’ll see how that goes though. When you have the time, mind posting your feedback after the story after a more detailed read?
5753762
Hmmm.
That depends on a few things.
One namely being I’d rather wait till everything smolders before giving thoughts.
5753764
That’s fair. I just don’t want you to think of this story as just filler before the finale as I made sure that there’s a lot of significant character revelations in here to make up for the fact that its sandwiched between the two objectively important entries. Plus, just as you love reading mine, I must admit that I love reading your feedback too. Really, all of the comments from you and everyone else help me significantly improve my writing craft and I really appreciate it.
5753765
It’ll feel less like filler once my concerns have been quelled, I can tell you that.
I just hate waiting. Hence why I make people wait months before I post single chapters on Fanfiction.
5753766
Ah, so we both know what it’s like to make our audience wait. It can be excruciating, I know, and I can relate to how you feel about it. I’m personally very sorry about all the constant hiatuses this series has gone through, but I’m just juggling way too much on my plate. I’m an author, a YouTuber, a college student, so much! And basically every free waking moment of my life has been spent on these ponies in some form or another. So I’m really doing the best I can when it comes to fulfilling all responsibilities. It’s definitely on me for going with such a ballsy ending in The Fall of Opaline that everyone’s so impatient for Redeemed. I think I can understand how people felt after the end of Avengers: Infinity War back in 2018 actually.
5753767
Let’s just see who posts their finale first.
Take that as you will.
5753768
Yeah. Personally, I hope I get to first because the beauty of this series from its very inception was that it was always a headcanon novelty. If I let Hasbro get ahead of me, then that specialty is ruined. So we shall see.
5753769
I meant between you and me
If you’ve been keeping up you should know I’m finishing Path to Peace soon
5753770
I have been keeping up. And I can’t wait to see what the end of your story looks like, considering how awesome it’s been so far to read it.
5753771
Okay. I didn’t know since you’ve been silent
5753772
Don’t worry, I’ve been keeping up. Life’s just kept me from getting down to writing detailed feedback for each chapter. You know me, I like to be detailed in my feedback. So at some point, I’ll be going back through the whole story and picking up where I left off with my comments.
5753774
Okay. It’ll be good to hear your thoughts.
This was one of your best stories yet!
G5 is less cringey to watch than G4 at this point.