Why Am I Bringing This Up Again?

Hello to my few friends out there... *taps glass* Hello? HELLO???

Meh, whatever. If you don't know already, I'm currently rewriting (or revamping, as I like to call it) my newest story, "Why, Twilight?" My plan is to submit it to EQD and get it approved. It still has a long ways to go, but I just finished revamping the 1st chapter, with the excellent editing/proofreading help of OpalBerries. Can't express enough appreciation for his help; he's awesome.

So yeah, I encourage you all to take a look at the revamped chapter. Give me any suggestions you like for improvement. If I'm going to submit to EQD, I'm gonna need all the help I can get.

Peace and love and crap,

SlipperPutty