First story.

Okay,
now the time has come. I just started my first story(If the link isnt available at the moment, it's still in checking procces.. But it will go online in a few minutes / hours) :) By now, it is just the prologue. Although the prologue is a little short, the chapters will be longer.
But I think it is okay like this.
If you have any annotations: please tell me. Show me all my faults, tell me what to do better next time. Or simply say: "well, I just liked it"
Feel free to comment anything you want to.

And have fun reading :)