Major Overhaul: Hide Yo' Kids, Hide Yo' Wife · 8:43am Nov 30th, 2013
With the imminent arrival of C.L.O.P.S., I'm going to hop into the Wayback Machine and bring it all back to the beginning.
Starting from sentence one, chapter one, of Ponyville 911, I'm gonna give the entire story the overhaul it desperately needs. Fixing basic sentence structure, replacing lame jokes with worse ones, it needs it, and I'mma fuckin' do it. Maybe this time around we'll finally find out what the hell actually happened to Lieutenants Blue Steel and Dingle Dangle after the Day of Discord! Maybe The Doctor's drunken spree that wibbly-wobbled its way through five chapters, non-consecutively, will finally make sense! Maybe we'll find out if Cherry, to put it bluntly, fucks!
All these questions and more will be answered between the upcoming revamps and the sequel story. By the way, I could definitely use some help with fixing up P911. If you have some spare time and you're feeling charitable, lemme know and we can polish this turd... together.
LOVE, PEACE, AND CHICKEN GREASE. YIPPEE-KI-YAY 'MURICA MOTHERFUCKERS.
This is what I did with Beyond Horizon's Edge, and you find a lot of terrible and cringe-worthy things. But it's totally worth it in the end and you go back and enjoy why you got into writing in the first place
Not sure how much help I'd be with the overhaul, but I am at your service.