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Just another fanfiction addict who likes good stories no matter what the fandom.Oh... and...RAINBOW DASH IS COOL!!!

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  • 287 weeks
    What is the Tree of Harmony?

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    Call it the Tree of Harmony.

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  • 349 weeks
    Shadow Play (Season 7 Finale)

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    Here's a little prediction about what I would like to see:

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  • 435 weeks
    Thoughts on the departure of RealityCheck

    So! RealityCheck has quit FIMFiction and taken down his stories! I wish I could say that I was surprised but I'm not.

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  • 451 weeks
    Plot Bunny #8 - The Guardians of Harmony

    In the aftermath of the Friendship Games, the Mane Seven find that they can increasingly Pony Up on demand. They also start spontaneously showing Equestrian-style powers (e.g. Rainbow can manipulate the weather in localised areas and cloud-walk; Applejack has super-strength; Fluttershy starts hearing her animal friends talk back; Rarity develops telekinesis and an 'instinct' about

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Dec
2nd
2013

Plot Bunny #6 - The Day of Celestia · 8:24pm Dec 2nd, 2013

This is an idea of what is inside the box (aka "The Ark") that is at the base of the Tree of Harmony.

Starswirl the Bearded is revealed as being the mystery pony seen at the end of Castle Mane-ia. He makes several appearances during Season 4, constantly drip-dropping innuendo about Celestia's past and whether she is really worthy of Twilight's love and admiration. Celestia, when asked by Twilight, is... vague... even openly evasive about Starswirl's charges and, when they confront each other, there are real sparks between them even though there is also clearly a bond of great love between him, Celestia and Luna.

Finally, when the Ark is opened, a rainbow vortex appears, leading into the box (say it with me, my little ponies: "It's bigger on the inside"). Starswirl starts raving about 'the wellspring of Harmony' and 'undoing a great mistake' and throws himself into the vortex.
...
As she plunges down the rainbow tunnel, TWILIGHT sees events from Celestia's past:

A very young pegasus CELESTIA rearing up to drive off a Manticore as a group of ponies cower behind a unicorn Luna and an unidentified male earth pony.

An adolescent alicorn CELESTIA falling from the sky, her wings singed as a monstrous dragon soars overhead
A young adult unicorn CELESTIA levitating a sword in her magic and duelling with a CHANGELING QUEEN who has a sword of her own...

An adult alicorn CELESTIA (still pink-maned), standing next to a blue-grey maned alicorn LUNA and the UNIDENTIFIED STALLION (now an alicorn) as they face a cackling DISCORD

TWILIGHT lands hard on all four legs and looks around herself frantically. She is on a barren, rocky plain with tall rocks all around her. Seeing any distance is nearly impossible due ot thick fog.

TWILIGHT
Hello? Princess? Anypony?

There is a clatter of hooves; TWILIGHT spins just in time to see a white Pegasi with a pink mane and tail and a sun cutie mark rush by.

There is a motion behind her. TWILIGHT spins and we see an older, pink-maned alicorn version of CELESTIA, appearing briefly through the fog as she strides determinedly somewhere.

TWILIGHT
Princess?

TWILIGHT staggers and falls to her knees. She begins to cry

TWILIGHT
I don't know where I am!

CELESTIA (v/o)
Twilight! Twilight Sparkle, can you hear me?

TWILIGHT
Yes, Princess! I hear you! Where are you?

CELESTIA chuckles

CELESTIA (v/o)
I am all around you Twilight. When you leapt into the Ark after Starswirl, you entered the very core of what gives me my power. Everything you see around you is... me... of sorts.

TWILIGHT whirls as a adolescent unicorn version of CELESTIA in golden armour gallops past.

TWILIGHT
I can hear so many voices...!

CELESTIA (v/o)
Those are my ghosts... My pasts and futures. My every good day and my every bad day.

There is a scream from somewhere off-screen.

TWILIGHT
I... I feel so weak!

CELESTIA (v/o)
It is not given to any being to intrude into the very core of another pony's being in this manner, Twilight Sparkle, even one as wise and as powerful as you!

TWILIGHT
I can't find my way out!

CELESTIA (v/o)
It is simple enough. Take this flower.

A rose spirals down from the sky and TWILIGHT grabs it in her magic.

CELESTIA (v/o)
Everything that you were, are and ever will be is represented in this simple blossom, Twilight. Take this. Hold it and never let it go.

CELESTIA, in her full, aura-maned alicorn glory steps out of the fog.

CELESTIA
Now, I will guide you home.

TWILIGHT hesitates

CELESTIA
Do not fear, Twilight Sparkle. I am not an illusion or one of the echos of past, present and future that inhabit this place. You have done so much for me, my most beloved and faithful student. You have saved me in so many times, places and ways. Now, I ask you to do the one thing that I have never given you reason to do: to put your trust in me. Allow me to save you as you have so often saved me!

TWILIGHT staggers forwards and takes CELESTIA in a tight hug.

CELESTIA
Oh my brave little filly; it's going to be okay.

CELESTIA suddenly freezes, her face a mask of horror as she looks at something behind TWILIGHT

Seemingly partly recovered, TWILIGHT looks around herself. Suddenly she sees something, a shadowy figure in the fog.

CELESTIA
Look away, My Little Pony

TWILIGHT
But who is that, Princess?

CELESTIA
Me. There's only me here, Twilight Sparkle, that is the point. But this is somepony that I pray you never come to know.

TWILIGHT takes a step away from CELESTIA. The fog is thinner now; the STRANGER is shadowed but humanoid, looking out from the top of a cliff at something.

TWILIGHT
I've seen all of you! So many faces and lives but they were all you. This one... I've never seen before! A human! You must have been through the Mirror too! Princess Celestia, why didn't you tell me that...?

TWILIGHT is about to step forwards but CELESTIA's wing blocks her way and her view.

CELESTIA
I said that she was 'me', Twilight Sparkle, but I never said that she was 'Princess Celestia'.

TWILIGHT
I don't understand!

TWILIGHT impatiently pushes CELESTIA's wing away. We see that the FIGURE is standing amongst what are unmistakably grave-stones. The cliff on which they are standing is overlooking a plain that stretches away as far as the eye can see; it is marked with literally uncountable grave-stones. TWILIGHT gasps.

CELESTIA uses her magic to yank TWILIGHT's head around so she is looking at her again.

CELESTIA
Twilight, what does my name mean?

TWILIGHT
It's in the old, ancient tongue; it means 'The Bringer of Light'

CELESTIA
My name; Twilight, Starswirl was right to say that Celestia is not my original name but that isn't the point. The point is that the name with which I was born doesn't matter. When you choose a name for yourself, you're making a promise - a solemn vow to live in accord with the meaning of that name! I am Celestia, the Bringer of Light. My purpose is to make things better for all of My Little Ponies.

CELESTIA looks at the FIGURE again, her face haunted.

CELESTIA
But her...?

CELESTIA visibly swallows her disgust and sorrow

CELESTIA
She is the one who broke that promise. She is the one who has no right to bear the name that claims such a high purpose.

TWILIGHT groans and suddenly collapses. CELESTIA effortlessly tosses the younger alicorn onto her back.

CELESTIA
She is my secret. She is my shame.

FIGURE
What I did, I did without choice.

CELESTIA
I know.

FIGURE
In the name of peace, Harmony, and all My Little Ponies.

CELESTIA's face hardens

CELESTIA
Yes... but not in the name of Celestia.

CELESTIA turns and strides away

The FIGURE turns around and we see it is young human woman, wearing a khaki trench-coat. Underneath, she is wearing shining chain-mail overlaid with gold and silver plate armour marked with Celestia's cutie mark. She has long blonde hair, tied back with a red bow, and sad cornflower-blue eyes. Around her neck is a gold-framed heart-shaped locket on a golden chain. The locket's front is a rainbow-coloured crystal.

CAPTION:

INTRODUCING

Megan Williams

AS

Celestia, The God-Empress of Ponykind

BLACKOUT

CELESTIA (v/o)
I've been running all my lives.

A young peagsus filly CELESTIA is looking on in horror as TIREK the ABOMINATION blasts QUEEN MAJESTY with his full dark might

CELESTIA (v/o)
Running across the face of this world for tens of centuries; from face to face and life to life.

An adolescent alicorn CELESTIA, her wings and mane burning and her face frozen in fear, pain and horror, falls from the sky as a GIANT DRAGON flies overhead

The POV rises up, through a corridor in a wall we see a pink-maned alicorn Celestia glaring determinedly out at something.

CELESTIA (v/o)
I've been running every second of every minute of every day for four and a half thousand years. I've resisted chaos, toppled tyrants and fought for peace in a world defined by strife.

The POV sweeps up and across a tableaux of ponies, past and present, including re-imagined ponies from G1, the MANE SIX and hundreds of tumbling artefacts; TWILIGHT SPARKLE stands, looking into a crystal ball at an image of a unicorn CELESTIA duelling with a CHANGELING QUEEN, both using telekinetically held swords

CELESTIA (v/o)
Now the time has come to face the consequences of all the choices I've made in the name of Celestia.

DISEMBODIED VOICES
Celestia...! Princess...! Princess Celestia...!

CELESTIA (v/o)
The future of Equestria now rests on the outcome of one moment of one single, impossible day.

POV leaps forwards past the figures of CELESTIA, LUNA, STARSWIRL and DISCORD. The air is filled with tumbling artefacts including CELESTIA's royal vestments, both versions of the ELEMENTS OF HARMONY and various types of pony weapons.

CELESTIA (v/o)
The day that I've been running from for so long that I've forgotten what is is like not to be running.

Amongst the tumbling artefacts is a diamond-edged longsword with CELESTIA's cutie mark in the centre of the cross-guard. A human hand reaches up and seizes the hilt

MEGAN rests the Sun Sword on her shoulder and smirks at the camera in a bitter, self-loathing manner.

MEGAN
The Day of Celestia.

MEGAN raises the sword to the skies and solar flame blazes along the length of its blade.

BEGIN INFINITE ZOOM OUT
Standing behind MEGAN are an older MOLLY and DANNY, who are both drawing their own weapons. MOLLY's armour marked with LUNA's cutie mark and DANNY's with STARSWIRL's cutie mark.

Behind the three humans are an army of hundreds of thousands of armoured ponies and fantastic engines of war including floating war machines and mighty land-crawling weapons platforms.

The ARMY charges just before the POV shoots into the clouds.

BLACKOUT

CAPTION:
To be concluded in...

My Little Pony II

The Day of Celestia

#Seizetheday - www.mlpdayofcelestiamovie.com

End credits to an instrumental version of "This is the Day"

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Comments ( 3 )

You are insane...ly awsome!
Still insane, but just so awesome it overshadows everything else.

There is a method to my insanity/plagiarism. I've long thought that Celestia and The Doctor share lot in common. They're both old, powerful and, I suspect, have committed unspeakable atrocities because, in the final calculation, the consequence of not doing so would be even worse. What sort of guilt could that mean Celestia carries around with her?

In a simple form, Megan from G1 = Celestia. Her younger brother, Danny, is Starswirl and her younger sister, Molly is Luna. In order to defeat the innumerable threats in the world of G1 in a lasting manner, they triggered a terrible war that ended with what was effectively multiple acts of genocide. They also took upon themselves tyrannical power to forge a perfect society. As a punishment for the suffering they caused, Discord's sister, Harmony, transformed them into alicorns and bound them to Equestria, never allowed to return to Earth. They would be eternally-lived and be reincarnated if they should die through violence or mischance, always taking the same forms: a white mare, a blue-black mare and a grey stallion. Their essentially good natures mean that they always find themselves drawn into the affairs of ponies to help and protect them, no matter how much they wish to simply wait out eternity in some place of eternal exile.

Over time, Danny's guilt ate away at him and he finally broke away from his sisters after Discord's defeat, trying to find some way to fix things in a way that doesn't require mass bloodshed (hence "Starswirl's" obsession with time travel). Ultimately, this leads everypony to a final confrontation on the day of Megan's greatest triumph and greatest tragedy - the day when she damned herself forever, in her own eyes, and in the process made the ponies the dominant life-form of the world and assured their ascendency for all of recorded history.

(Ultimately, Luna's fall will be revealed to be just as connected to Molly's own guilt, as is Celestia's near-obsessive self-denial and focus on the happiness and safety of her 'little ponies'.)

One small note: "Celestia" - "The Bringer of Light". In Latin, "light-bringer" is "Lucifer", one of the names of the Devil. Megan was a religious girl and chose this name as a recognition of the dark path she was going to walk to protect her friends. It remains an ironic amusement to her that her Little Ponies have recorded it as the name of the greatest benefactress that ponykind ever knew.

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