Pre-Reader needed!

Hello, everyone! This is my first bog post, so hi! But straight to business.

I'm working on a story which hasn't been posted, because I need a pre-reader. It talks about the origin of the Kuros Empire, which means how they came to be. I'm not saying anything about the exact plot, but the tags are dark, tragedy and sad. If anyone would be so kind as to lend me a hoof, I'd be grateful!

PLEASE!!