Progress on Fallout Equestria: An enemy of my Friend

Hi guys. Sorry for a very long wait I had things to do and also I was still happy after I came back from Bronycon. Anyways My story is still in full swing, I'm still making more for the first chapter. Alicorne has helped me to make some edition to my first chapter. So. I really still need all the help I can get. So can be so kind of helping me out here it would be really nice and if 1 of guys has read the Fallout Equestria stories maybe you can me gets some ideas of how to make the story better and if 1 of you want me to show you what I have done so far and also do some editing and maybe I can allow your OC's in my story and plus tell me about them. Please PM (Private Message) me. Because maybe we can work on this story together as a team.