The last flight of the Shadowbolts

I did it! This is my first serious FiM story and I’m very excited to see how people will response to it. English isn’t my first language and I have no pre-reader (yet), so hopefully there aren’t too many grammatical errors or spelling mistakes.

The story itself takes place a few years after the show and focuses on the Wonderbolts and their soon-to-be rivals the Shadowbolts, so you should expect a whole lot of OCs. In fact the only Wonderbolts from the show are Spitfire and Soarin – and maybe Rainbow Dash who canonically isn’t a member of the team. Sure I could’ve used Fleetfoot, “Misty”, “Surprise” and Co. but there isn’t that much Fanon material about them, therefore I said “Screw it!” and made-up my own Wonderbolts.

I’m looking forward to your comments, positive and negative alike. Every opinion helps me to improve my writing so please don’t hold back.