Banished storyline · 5:41am Dec 9th, 2014
As you all (hopefully) know, I have cancelled Banished. Why? I lacked a good storyline.
So, the plan was that RD goes to a wonderbolts tryout thingamajig. Chyrsalis turns into RD and 'kills' Cadence with a fire. Rarity sees 'RD' go to Cadence's canterlot house - this wouldn't work because she doesnt have one and Chrysalis could have turned into someone else not RD - and RD is banished because of 'evidence' aka feathers and hoofmarks. - storyline sucks so far - Then, RD meets Soarin', and they fall in love. Soarin' is actually an evil murderer set on killing RD because he can. Then they go back to equestria because Fluttershy rescues them. Then, all of the Mane 6 get married. The end.
Then, in the sequel, all of the evil ever in Equestria returns and kills everyone. The children of the Mane Six are angry and kill the evil ponies. Then, Serpent, my OC, goes and kills everyone.
As you can see, the sequel would have been even more violent than the first one. I'm ashamed of myself now. To think I could write such a story.... *sobs*
I've written much more violent stories.
My Oc gets to kill hundreds of ponies as she terrorizes the town. I'd like to see this story now that you mention how violent it is.....
Now that I read it like that, I'm pretty sure that that sequel would make a good jewel here.
...That is, if you decide to go with it.
And if you decide to make more graphic murders. We all love them.
I might write the sequel just because xD
omg best idea ever
SOARIN GOES MAD
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2643449 yay violence!
And yay soarin!
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Ogodyesplz, do that.
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alrighty, give me ideasssss
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Soaring drinks too much Cider.
Soarin accidentally murders somepony.
Soarin likes to murder.
And thus, he starts rampage against everyone.
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Yes just yes.
Ima call it... The Murdereous Adventures of Soarin'
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Ogodyesplz.
Have my prevemptive Like.
*Hits an invisible like n' Favourite*