Chapter Six - More Proofreading Required!

With some assistance from Murder Knight, I hope that - finally - Chapter Six of this thing is ready to go.

But, of course, I still want a couple of people to go over it and point out any mistakes.

The first two people to comment will get a link to the next chapter. Remember, I want you to be brutally honest when giving me feedback.

If you proofread the last time I asked, you will not be allowed to do so again — only one person is exempt from this, hence why I am saying 'the first two people' instead of 'the first three people.'

Stay awesome, and thank you so much for your continued patience.

Comments

[DominiusTWD]

wooo neat, i thought this had kicked the bucket. welcome back, i look forward to lots of feels.

[duithy]

i am in