Feedback - Resume I

The first haitus for Feedback ends tomorrow! I got a reasonable amount of work done within the last few weeks.

I have admittedly, spent the past few weeks working on only one chapter. I'd normally be worried about this as I spent twice the amount of time trying to finish this chapter than I do to finish other chapters. But, however, it makes sense, as this chapter ended up being nearly twice as long as currently published chapters. Not actually twice as long, but nearly.

I may try to trim it down just a tad, but otherwise the chapter reads a lot like I want it to. That's a very good sign. I've learned a lot over the course of writing this story so far and I could dare say that I'm twice the writer that I was when I started.

Admittedly now, I haven't spent as much time with the older chapters as I would have liked. However, I will touch on that in just a second.

Now, for tomorrow, my plan is to publish the new chapter in the evening according to EST. Not sure when that will be because I am on vacation (Disney World! Disney World!) so that's up in the air. Before then, I will attempt to affect additional changes to earlier chapters. Naturally, once the new chapter goes up, it can be assumed that those minor style improvements to previous chapters will be complete to the best of my ability.

See you all tomorrow!