Dialogue Revisions & Other Fun Maintenance · 4:02am Jul 16th, 2015
Dialogue revisions and sentence structure revisions will take place in Wandering Through Realities before Chapter III: "The Aeons Torn" is published in the coming days.
The urge to revise has grown on me such as a strange Kenyan rash would. Now that I have the story successfully submitted, people get to read the Prologue and Chapters I & II to get a feel for the story while the changes take place.
These revisions will not alter the story function; only fattening up dialogue, overall dialogue formatting, and paragraphical revision will commence. I may also attempt to rewrite the characters a little (I felt that they were a bit rushed and OOC). I hope everyone is enjoying the story so far!
Stay beautiful,
Zolvy-poo.