Stories of mine you disliked the most

The question, one for an idea I had recently, is simple: which one of my stories did you like the least, and why?

Maybe you disliked "From the Start" for its pretentiousness? Or maybe you didn't like "Spiked Wheels" for how Scootaloo's chracter is handled? Or you didn't like "Boia Dè" for the open ending?

Anything goes, just tell me which one of my stories did you like the least here. You can also make some kind of "Ranks of Shame" if oyu wish.

Comments

[SuperPinkBrony12]

I would have to say your weakest story is Incotinens Nos et Cochlearem Argenti. First off, Noi being rendered incontinent isn't a bad idea in and of itself, but using the evil surgeron that damages her body is going over the top and is a case of Emotional Manipulation, in which you attempt to make the audience sympathize with a character by making them undergo something horrific, tragic, or just making the situation as sad as possible. Second is Carrot Top, Noi's sister, who is completely unsympathetic to Noi's condition for no good reason. Noi should be able to count on her big sister to be a shoulder for her to cry on, not someone to push her around and bully her. And third, although Silver Spoon befriending Noi is a good idea, it would probably make more sense for someone like Sweetie Belle to become Noi's friend first, especially seeing as there doesn't seem to be any mention of why Silver Spoon isn't with Diamond Tiara.