Ten Little Critters · 7:49pm Aug 23rd, 2015
Ten little critters, all gathered and looking fine.
One choked on pride, and then, there was nine.
Nine little critters, practically served on a plate.
One spoke poorly, and then there were eight.
Eight little critters, those passed now in heaven.
One took fright, and then, there were seven.
Seven little critters, one surrounded by chicks.
One roused anger, and then there were six.
Six little critters, all struggling to survive.
One was soaked, and then there were five.
Five little critters, surviving has become a chore.
One tasted death, and then there were four.
Four little critters all trying to flee.
One’s love betrayed them, and then there were three.
Three little critters, one died having fun.
The killer was killed.
And then there was one.
Oh yes. There will be murder. Murder most foul!
The ten mentioned are Luna, Celestia, Redheart, Micah, and the Mane Six
First chapter coming in September.
Cool quick read, trying to puzzle out who was who.
3341483 The ten are Micah, Celestia, Luna, Redheart, and the Mane Six.
"ten little roosters..."
Ten little roosters, all gathered to dine
One chocked on his rage, and then there were nine
Nine little roosters, now running from fate
One tripped over themselves, and then there were eight
Eight little roosters, two others in heaven
One was martyred, and then there were seven
Seven little roosters, one liked to draw dicks
Life imitated art, and then there were six
Six little roosters, often streamed live
One died to scale, and then there were five
Five little roosters, one trapped in the floor
One ran out of air, and then there were four
Four little roosters, still trying to flee
One got what they wanted, and then there were three
Three little roosters, one died of a pun
The killer was killed
And then there was one...
3342570 Aye, I got the idea after watching them. It's not going to be a copy, and to be fair Roosterteeth got the idea from a book. The deaths are different, as are the characters.
3342581 Nah, I'm not criticizimg or anything. In fact, I was just jumping around happily after reading that nice way you did it there. I loved Ten little Roosters, so I immediately checked your blog for this thing. I have been so far sadly a little disinterested on this story I don't really know why, it's really good in my opinion. This here probably is got me to make me spend all night until tomorrow catching up on it
3342585 Heh, no problem. I admit I haven't really written much of the story lately after getting blasted by my brother for one chapter that I'm rewriting.
3342589 Ahhh, I'm having trouble with writing myself. I have a loooot of things currently in my agenda, and I made the mistake of starting a second story, so two stories to upload now...
Phew!!!
Also... If you don't mind, of course. Many people get a little upset at this question. What religion are you? I think you told once, and I've noticed you are religious due to your story my very little ponies. I'm just curious
3342595 Christian, but I keep to many Jewish practices. My bible is the Complete Jewish Bible, which is a Christian bible written by a Messianic rabbi reviving a lot of Hebrew words and terms, and also the books in the original Jewish order.
3342625 Oh. I'm Catholic, really conservative on that. I like the way you seem to dare to write about religion in your stories, since most people choose to keep it out.
3342629 Glad to do it
3342636 Well, I've got a story to catch up! *Goes and opens To return Home*