Zephyr Grif · 8:31pm Jun 5th, 2016
While watching "Flutter Brutter", I couldn't help but grin at the irony that Fluttershy's brother is a lazy slacker who will find creative and ridiculous ways to get out of doing work, considering who Fluttershy ends up forming a sibling-like bond with in I Against I, Me Against You.
In light of that, I decided to go and do something I will usually never even consider: I pulled a George Lucas. Yep, after watching the new episode, I went back and revisited a chapter of IAIMAY to make sure it doesn't conflict with new canon (the chapter originally mentioned that Flutters was an only child). Not only did this fix the obvious canon contradiction, I also believe it actually made the scene work better on multiple levels.
For those curious, the scene I'm talking about is in chapter 3-2: Trust is a Weakness when Fluttershy consoles Grif after telling him what happened to Sister (a little past halfway through). Give it a read if you feel like it, but don't feel obligated to. It's only about one paragraph different and the story ultimately plays out exactly the same, just a little bit better in my opinion. See, George Lucasing something isn't always terrible. But if I ever decide to go back and add a character screaming "NOOO!" for no reason, somebody please put me out of my misery. Wyoming shot first
On another note, the first chapter of the side story I've been working on is finished and edited, I'm just waiting to see whether my friend is going to be able to put together some cover art for me. Expect to see something of that in the next week or two!
Well, this makes the theory that Kaikaina used to be sweet and pure even more believeable.
I just saw the chapter. I was greatly dissappointed that Zephyr Breeze didn't have any orange.
Huh... how fitting.