New Story - Lord of the Dragons

Ever wonder why all the large dragons from the dragon migration didn't show up to the Gauntlet of Fire?

Or how Celestia knows so little about dragons, despite knowing exactly where their seat of government is, and where their lands are?

Or why the Gauntlet of Fire, intended for "big, strong" dragons, instead seemed to reward agility, teamwork, and cunning?

I did. So I wrote a story about it.

Lord of the Dragons
Drama
2,558 words

Before the Gauntlet of Fire, Celestia, Luna, and Dragon Lord Torch meet to discuss the future of their kingdoms – and how to ensure that the next Dragon Lord is exactly who they want it to be.

I'm not sure about the summary; I kind of want to include a lot of the stuff I noted above in it, but alas, I'm not sure how to do it without it seeming like it is trying too hard.

Any feedback on that would be appreciated.

As would any help editing the story itself.

I do intend to be more active in getting my stories done - I've been procrastinating on getting this done since episode 5 of this season.

EDIT: The story has been posted. It can be found here.

Comments

[Winston]

I can help pre-read / edit.

[Titanium Dragon]

4191159
Awesome! Thank you dude.

[DumbDog]

As usual. I'll toss my name into the hat.

Oh, and it's a short one too!

[MixMassBasher]

Would be cool if you did some How to train your dragon references somewhere.

[Eruantalon]

4191404 How To Train Your Dragon III: How To Fit Your Dragon Onto A Train.

[TuxOKC]

Send me a link and help hunt tyops too!

[DrapeWrites]

4191576 you spelled "typos" wrong.

Send me a link, I'll be glad to help!

[Titanium Dragon]

4195580
I think he was being intentionally silly.

In any case, thanks for the offer, but I actually posted this story yesterday.

I'm sure I'll need more editors in the future though.

[DrapeWrites]

4195770 OK. I'll help you in the future then. :D