Nanowrimo week 2

Probably not going to finish on time unless I pick up the pace. Here's the next 3 chapters.

I'd really love some feedback. I have NO idea if the story is any good...

chapter 4 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mm_TZenstWY6DUQ_jhiH_fTXJq_cUX4PhMDyrCT0fb8/edit?usp=sharing
chapter 5 https://docs.google.com/document/d/17zfmsq1jLFaC9NbVWk_M8kjuW5hh-fU2Uqd_esr56RA/edit?usp=sharing
chapter 6 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RYt4qegebzXFj5Kqu7HqJoi7YvglJNL7op4LQyy7hqU/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

[Who needs sleep]

sombro, dude. your writing is incredible. one thousand five hundred and sixty-six other people agree with that. kkat herself approved of project horizons. you spawned a sweeping headcanon so strong that it's practically canon to the main story. the brain drippings that you do occasionally often have more thought behind them than i could ever muster. seeing an update in my feed from you is awesome as the invention of the taco, the entire star trek voyager(best trek) series and oxygen together.

before i start fangirling here, just remember
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