Review # 16 - Just a Normal Meeting, Accidental Banishment

Alright, so today I have two stories, they are:

Just a Normal Meeting by LuneLover
Accidental Banishment by NixWorld

Just a Normal Meeting by LuneLover
(Drama)
It was just a normal day for Celestia. Meetings, paperwork, and court. Well, it was normal, until court happened. And she got a special visitor with a strange request.

Review
Celestia gets a petition to have Princess Luna's title taken away due to her being useless. Celestia yells at him. Celestia goes to meet with Luna.

This story is pretty much all set-up, and then Celestia and Luna having a moment, which gives it very annoying pacing. It does not have many errors, though, which is nice. But it does not seem very planned out. However, the tag works well enough.

Score: 4/10 Recommendation: Not Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: Yeah, this one was an "eh" story.

Accidental Banishment by NixWorld
(Comedy, Random)
Princess Celestia accidentally sends Luna back to the moon. She doesn’t want to wait another thousand years for her sister to return so she requests help from the space agency to help retrieve Luna before she gets irritated. If only Luna would be a bit more cooperative with the rescue team.

Review
Luna gets banished to the moon again, and Celestia sends a rescue team. Luna is rather grouchy and refuses to come back down. One of the astronauts asks if she will come if he can convince her of extra-terrestrial life. She agrees to that.
He says “Since she and her sister control the sun and moon, I said that she, out of all ponies, should believe in alien life... [So] who’s controlling the other suns and moons in the universe?"
Luna proceeds to come back from the moon.

So, this one had fairly good pacing, especially considering the shortness of it. There are, fortunately, very few errors in the text. It also feels, at the least very least, mostly planned out. Oh, and the tags fit rather well.

Score:7.5/10 Recommendation: Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: A nice story that I found very funny.