Update · 11:39pm Oct 3rd, 2012
Hi guys. I've started chapter 2 and hopefully, if my schedule permits it It will be out soon. (Exact date TBD will tell if I know) Thanks to all the people who posted an Idea, and if you have one and want to post it go ahead I'll acknowledge everypony who submitted their idea weather it was used or not because I love that all of you got into the story enough to post your idea.
So, a little bit on chapter 2, I will be adding Spike into this story now that I have an idea on how to characterize him (Thanks MarshmallowSundae) as for the comment dealing with me writing a Twilight and Rarity story, I would love to write one but it would have to be a separate story, so to all of the Rarity x Twilight fans out there, if you're reading this, I will write one later. Lastly I will make sure that I've got no grammar errors for sure, Don't be afraid to point them out if you see them; I love it when people do that it shows me that I still need to keep working and hopefully with enough reminders I will stop the mistakes for good, and I will work on the dialog for each of the ponies to make it match their personality as best as I can. (Hopefully they wont turn out to be OOC)
So keep watching for chapter two and the changes I will make and post an idea if you have one!!!
-Jo