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Phaoray


Editor of several Trixie writers while doing his own stories when possible. Fun Times. Tips are appreciated, but no pressure.

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  • 177 weeks
    Really should pay more attention sometimes.

    https://www.equestriadaily.com/2019/10/40-of-best-trixie-fanfics-for-trixie-day.html

    I am sporadic at looking at Equestria Daily. I regret never knowing this happened, or that I was on it. :twilightblush:

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  • 185 weeks
    Stupid Thought.

    Cozy Glow was sending letters to Tartarus...how did anyone not notice that!? How did no pony read over the letter before hand to make sure it was okay for some twelve year old to be sending letters to Tirek in the first place? How did she get the address to Tartarus!? Why does it even have a address you can look up!? :twilightangry2:

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  • 235 weeks
    Still up there?

    I am quite surprised, Horror Flick is still on the main page four days later and on a Saturday to boot. It is now dropping and being beaten by a story involving a, and I quote from the description 'Big Tiddy Goth Babe'.

    I am okay with this.

    Just wanted to thank everyone who read and enjoyed it. Been awhile since I did more than editing and happy to see my work is still well liked.

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  • 343 weeks
    About 1/2 way done now.

    Just a small update on my existence for those wondering. Still here, but I kind of got caught up in things with real life and also lost the interest to write for a bit, which is annoying because I was ecstatic at all the new follows Complex Apartments brought in. :pinkiehappy:

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  • 348 weeks
    Movie Time Approaches!

    Huzzah! Finally! After months of avoiding Derpiboroo spoilers and ignoring trailers and every spoiler plausible on Equestria Daily the time is approaching! Tomorrow I shall see this movie and be able to stop worrying about having the movie ruined.

    What I know so far:

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May
17th
2017

Sequel and other news! · 2:58am May 17th, 2017

So far, I am getting back into writing again quite well. One Way Ticket is coming along, though I am lacking a storyboard. Very odd to go off the cuff on a story, but it is kind of fun.

But, onto the main point. The first chapter of Hopes and Follies sequel: Betwixt and Benighted, is done. It is going through final editing now.

The only real delay to it's release is the cover art, which I just got the confirmation of the commission today. So, it may be another week or two, but the wait is no longer due to me not actually writing it. :twilightsheepish:

Sorry it took me this long to get back to it. I'll make sure that there is at least a chapter each month on it till it finishes. Hoping I update it more than that, but that'll be the minimum I'll strive for. Taking a college class coming next week, so life is gonna be busy.

I forgot how much fun Discord is to write.

I'll probably do 2-3 chapters of it before looking at making the next Mauxie story. And as for the sequel to Gryphon Empire...heck..I still need to make a new epilogue for that one, let alone look at the sequel. So that's gonna be a bit.

Hopes and Follies needs a few minor details altered, but editing is kind of a motivation killer, so I'll work on that after the sequel's first chapter is out, to raving success I hope. :pinkiehappy:

Sadly, the writer I had found to write out a Trixie x Adagio story has lost a lot of interest in the fandom, and didn't reply to my inquiries on anything, so that is on hold until I find someone. I could add it to my own list of things to write, but I kind of wanted to enjoy reading it as opposed to creating it. Sucker for a Cute Face just makes me want to see a long Trixie X Adagio fic, even if I need to pay to have it done. :twilightsheepish:

Enough rambling, off to bed.

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Betwixt and Benighted, is done. It is going through final editing now.

At last we find out if Trixie's eye gets better! :pinkiesmile:

Sucker for a Cute Face just makes me want to see a long Trixie X Adagio fic, even if I need to pay to have it done.

Ahh, guilt. :twilightoops:

If it helps, I am pretty sure I'll be writing my own fic that ultimately ends in TrixiexAdagio (spoiler alert!) with plenty of teases in between, but not until Yandere Simulator is finished and I've had some time to play through it. Or, at least until I understand enough about the final rival (and maybe the Senpai character, whom I suspect is hiding something) to be able to know exactly what kind of ending I'm working towards. The game is due to be finished in a couple years, though, so I understand (and support! Albeit without contributing to any commission because I'm so cheap!) hoping for something else in the mean time. :eeyup:

...It really is amazing that for all the talk I remember hearing back when Rainbow Rocks came out, there's so little between those two. People talked about Sunset and Twilight in the same way and that's one of the most popular ships, I think. :rainbowhuh:

Wooooo. Been waiting for this for a while. Glad to so you back.

Hopes and follies is why I started following you, crazy to think it's been nearly 3 years

The first chapter of Hopes and Follies sequel: Betwixt and Benighted, is done.

This is not a drill. I repeat, this is not a drill. Lock the doors and close the blinds, we're going for a ride.
This means I have to re-read HaF because I remember the bare minimum. Will you do a blog when the edits to it are done?

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I'll be writing my own fic that ultimately ends in TrixiexAdagio (spoiler alert!) with plenty of teases in between, but not until Yandere Simulator is finished

Oh, well that's cool, I can't wai-

The game is due to be finished in a couple years, though

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Well then.

It really is amazing that for all the talk I remember hearing back when Rainbow Rocks came out, there's so little between those two.

Pretty much, there is two stories of them I know of. One was unfinished and was a alternate to what happened in Rainbow Rocks, the other was during Rainbow rocks and involved Trixie becoming a siren. There has actually been more stories of Trixie x Sunset. Shimmer of Magic being probably the best of them that I know of.

And don't feel guilty, I just really like your story and it makes me wish to see more hilarity with Adagio, just with Trixie along for the embarrassing, teasing, ride. :pinkiehappy:


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Will you do a blog when the edits to it are done?

Yeah, I should have done the editing before starting the next story, but editing is a bit more draining, so I'd like to get some progress on new stories before going back to re-edit. The significant changes will be the story taking place shortly after Tirek as opposed to before. So some lines and references to the library will be changed to Twilight's castle. Discord talking to Fluttershy near the end will alter a little. And I'll clean up some of the wording that irritates me now that I know better. :twilightblush:

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:ajbemused:
Well then.

Sorry. :twilightsheepish:
I know I could just make up details to suit whatever I wanted it to be, but an AU-crossover thing like this calls for a good understanding of the source material, references to the game itself, clear resemblances to the plot, in-jokes regarding game mechanics that, if handled well, won't make unfamiliar readers feel like they've missed anything while providing a laugh to those that played it too. I could fill in the blanks with anything that worked, but I know I wouldn't be satisfied with the result once Yandere Sim finally came out and what I came up with had virtually nothing to do with it.
I'm already omitting the murder part entirely because I've never been a fan of grimdark. :twilightoops:

the other was during Rainbow rocks and involved Trixie becoming a siren.

I happen to have that one in my favorites list! :raritystarry:

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That Siren transformation one is also in my favorites. Out of curiosity, what's the other? I am also disappointed in the amount of Trixie/Adagio available.

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Temptation Awaits. It's interesting, but only two chapters, so you don't really get much of where it is going to go. The writer is still active, so hoping he does more of it one day.


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I know I wouldn't be satisfied with the result once Yandere Sim finally came out and what I came up with had virtually nothing to do with it.

I hear ya, though from what I understand didn't he partner with a company that should help him create the game sooner, while also being able to have a life of his own? :pinkiehappy:

I've not played Yandere simulator, but I watched a few "Fluttershy Plays' of it, and I am subscribed to him on youtube to keep up on updates.

I'm already omitting the murder part entirely because I've never been a fan of grimdark.

Glad to hear that, Gryphon Empire is the closest to Grim Dark I imagine going. Though one scene in the Hopes and Follies sequel will probably come close or go a liiiiittle over that.

I need to find a new favorite story, I have been re-reading Sucker again this week. :facehoof: So many things that hint at future scenes that I am sure you either forgot, or don't intend to use. Pirate Outfits, exercising at the Dazzlings, Adagio experimenting with the different ways looking at Fluttershy can cause her to react and trying to figure out why, I could go on. :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks.

I feel like people overuse the term 'grimdark' One dark scene does not qualify, that's normal dark. Well, maybe if it's ridiculously over the top horrible, I suppose.

If you need to find a good story to read, I could probably make a few suggestions, knowing you like romantic comedies. Unfortunately, some of the best stories I've seen are long languishing unfinished fics but there's still plenty of complete ones.

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I hear ya, though from what I understand didn't he partner with a company that should help him create the game sooner, while also being able to have a life of his own? :pinkiehappy:

There's certainly hope, but with the consistent pattern of things being ready later than he first announces them to be, I'm not counting on it. :applejackunsure:

Glad to hear that, Gryphon Empire is the closest to Grim Dark I imagine going. Though one scene in the Hopes and Follies sequel will probably come close or go a liiiiittle over that.

I can generally stomach dark moments just fine, but not when that's the primary focus (as doing shady things to murder one's romantic rivals would be) in something I primarily turn to for light-hearted entertainment. Which is ironic, because it was Pinkie and Fluttershy's now-legendary season 1 freak-outs (specifically these ones! :pinkiecrazy::flutterrage:) that got me to finally give FiM a look. :twilightsheepish:

That sentiment being true while I'm simultaneously interested in Yandere kidnap-torture-mindslave-bully-into-suicide Simulator might call for explaining. In most games I play, there tends to be little to make me care about any given character much, even the protagonist. There usually isn't a whole lot of characterization, not a lot of little humanizing moments, not a lot to paint the player as much more than a robot through which to enact violence. In those cases, all the murder-frenzy in the world is just so much white noise, and the countless mounds of bodies might as well be fallen blades of grass after a thorough lawn-mowing.

That, and I'd like nothing more than to use the Matchmaking method for every single rival (I already ship Megami Saikou with the mad scientist kid!) for what is most likely the Golden Ending, at least the first time through. :raritystarry:

I need to find a new favorite story, I have been re-reading Sucker again this week. :facehoof: So many things that hint at future scenes that I am sure you either forgot, or don't intend to use. Pirate Outfits, exercising at the Dazzlings, Adagio experimenting with the different ways looking at Fluttershy can cause her to react and trying to figure out why, I could go on. :twilightsheepish:

Sorry for the long wait, but progress is being made.

I could probably wrap up the most recent scene and publish something tomorrow, but it'd leave off on the most biting cliffhanger of the story so far, so I figured it might be better to do the next few scenes after it, get to a calmer stopping point, and either publish a longer chapter or chop them into two and publish both on the same day. That is the current plan. :coolphoto:

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