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Tide Hunter


I am an editor. I've also tried writing, though I lack experience with writing stories.

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Feb
6th
2018

I spent an unnecessarily long time describing some images which Vest made 3 years ago · 3:58am Feb 6th, 2018

And my descriptions are certainly not well written. Wrote them yesterday in a Discord server.

Rainbow Dash stands on a small pillar, at the mouth of a cave. The cloud of her mark is the mouth, with the bolt being formed in three parts: the closer, in which there is much light but it is cast in shadow, colored almost like semi-distant lava was near, the furthest, appearing to be a crack in the wall reaching into a valley, and the closest, not quite fully in the cavern but mostly shadowed, colored almost as if water was reflecting.
Twilight glides, backwards over a lake. She bears a face of determination as she levitates to long strands of water, coiling around her. In the cave wall, two small star-like sections shine. Similarly, half of another lies touching the water, and another, larger half, lies behind an old, mossy pink rock. In the lake below, the reflections are almost clear, yet distorted by ripples. A stream falls from a crack near the highest star.
Rarity is on a snowy cliff. She lies, unafraid, on a thin piece that could break off, the only flat piece with no snow. She examines the small group of gems embedded in the rock in front of her, shaped like three apples. Her small section has a few other gems: orange, green, blue, and purple. The sun shines from behind, casting light on her. In the back, embedded in the cliff wall, are three massive crystals, shaped like diamonds, yet near completely smooth, save for a few carved lines.
Fluttershy is in the woods. She lays on a massive, ancient root above a lake, watching a butterfly. Behind her, waters streams to form antennae, gathering together to form a miniature waterfall, forming the body before hitting the wood and trickling down as the gaps glow pink. She smiles, holding her left foreleg for the butterfly to land upon.
Applejack stands, unafraid and alone, at a cliff. Like Rarity's, it is thin, and could easily crack and send her tumbling below. Unlike Rarity, who was at a snowy cliffside, she stands in a wide, cavernous lave-filled cave, and unlike Rarity, she stands. She stares at her mark, watching the molten rock flow with the only openings being those with green light streaming to form the leaves, directly above the fiery pits.
Pinkie floats up from one of the Caverns. East of it lies a similar one. They are both filled with bright, blue water, trickling in and out. The view is obscured, making the entrances appear like balloons, and making what may be roots or may be rocks appear to be strings. Above, the sun shines brilliantly throughout a valley, one with a small stream of its own trickling down to the cliff area. A tree obscures the vision, making the valley to appear a balloon itself.

The descriptions of the pictures which I first made and the descriptions I eventually posted were different. The Applejack and Pinkie ones were the same as I first wrote. Fluttershy's was mostly the same. The Rarity one was a bit less descriptive. The Twilight one was pretty much just "Twilight is floating above a lake. Half her mark is above, and the reflection can be seen in the lake below." Rainbow's actually was "Rainbow Dash stands at the mouth of the cave. The cloud [of her mark] is the opening and the rest of her mark is (something which I forgot) on the cave wall below." As should be a bit clear, I got more descriptive as time went on, and decided to go back and edit them into what they are now before posting. I took so long that the owner of the server said, "Tilde hunter is typing a book" (I used to be in another discord server in which I got nicknamed Tilde Hunter. Not sure exactly why, but it was either due to me spamming the use of a bot which had its commands start with a tilde, or someone misspelled my name and we just went with it.). It took about 20 minutes to write and edit, and then after posting I made a few other edits for the spelling and grammar errs.

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