Turnabout Storm Parts 16-18 Updated

Continuing my few-a-week pace, the next three story chapters involving Phoenix meeting up with Pinkie Pie and searching Ace’s hotel room/first encounter with Sonata have been updated and undergone a full editing pass by my prereader production crew of AJ_Aficionado, Silentwoodfire, and Denim_Blue.

Changes this time are mostly adding some additional graphics, detail and dialogue, cleaning up the existing lines as well as the LUS (Lavender Unicorn Syndrome) instances I used way too much of before, even for characters other than Twilight. The updated chapters are looking good and read well. Onward!