TFor a Better Tomorrow - Part 1: The Fallen Crown
MLP: FiM
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After Starlight changed the past, Twilight got stuck in the timeline with the war against King Sombra. All of ponykind is holding on, but King Sombra has a few secrets ready to be played.
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Chapter 2 Update

Well, Chapter 2 is finally written. But now comes the time for me to ask for proofreaders. I'm only looking for one or 2 people to look over the chapter and give some basic feedback; dumb grammar mistakes, parts feeling too rushed, stuff like that. Let me know below if you're interested!
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Chapter 1 is here!

Ok, this took so much longer to get out to you guys than I wanted. I finished this chapter back in December, but wanted somepony to proofread it before I published it. After trying to find somepony for a while, someone said they would be willing to help. Their life ended up getting busier than they thought and they were unable to give it a look like they originally thought, which I fully
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Merry Christmas and Happy Hearth's Warming everypony! I hope all you had a good holiday!
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Chapter 1 update

I just finished writing the first pass at chapter 1 last night. Sitting at a beautiful 2.2k words, Twilight recounts events that led up to where we are now. Tomorrow I plan on starting the editing process and begining to write the next chapter. Hopefully editing doesn't take too long and I can get the chapter published soon.
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26th

2018

Chapter 2 Update · 7:11pm Mar 26th, 2018

Well, Chapter 2 is finally written. But now comes the time for me to ask for proofreaders. I'm only looking for one or 2 people to look over the chapter and give some basic feedback; dumb grammar mistakes, parts feeling too rushed, stuff like that. Let me know below if you're interested!

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