Update 2 · 12:21am May 16th, 2018
I have so many ideas for to start over that it isn't funny, which is why the next chapter is taking forever to get out.
Also, to explain some of the ideas I have about Sunset's character is that it is implied that she has a bad temper and I do not think that she changed her ways overnight, falling back on bad habits now and then, especially if things go wrong. Also, I plan for the next chapter to kind of help Sunset begin to separate the principal and the princess, at least to a point.
I know my grammar and pace is a bit off (I have not written seriously since high school...which was roughly five years ago! Damn, I now feel old.) so just bare with me, I'll eventually get back into the rhythm of things.
I'm enjoying "To Start Over" so far. Your pacing hasn't been a problem as far as I am concerned.