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Ice Star


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  • TAll That Lingers
    The night that Cadance discovered the ghost of King Sombra lurking in the Crystal Palace should have been the worst of her life. Her greatest enemy is now lingering in her own home... and she knows that she's going to get to the bottom of this.
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May
17th
2018

Accept Me Twice · 10:19pm May 17th, 2018

As I've come to learn via my Discord server, something bizarre has happened. In fact, it is so bizarre that the only thing that could make it seem normal is if I remembered my other email password and actually bothered to check it, or browsed Equestria Daily, well, daily.

Because, my weird cult of followers, apparently, the revised (yes, it had a revision I forgot to blag about) of All That Lingers got its paranormal romance ass on Equestria Daily.

So, woo!

EDIT: It already got another favorite? Jeez, that was fast.

Comments ( 18 )

Noice!

I've only ever gotten on EqD through backhanded methods. (Derpy day!) You're talent got you there.

So, congrats!

4862928
Thank you! It took a while to get a Somdance story with mircochapters of all things in, but here it is!

And I literally had no idea until I was pinged.

Great Job~! Now to read it-

I feel important for being the one to inform you, haha.

But seriously, it's a completely-well deserved honor. All That Lingers is a beautiful story indeed.

4862946
THANK YOU FOR PINGING ME OR I OTHERWISE PROBABLY WOULDN'T HAVE KNOWN

D48

Huh, it's a good thing I read it a while back then. I wouldn't have touched it if I had seen that feature note in the description.

4863031
Really? Why not?

Also, it's undergone a clean up and a few tweaks. You might like the new version.

D48

4863048
Long story short, a very long history of EQD rejecting great stories and featuring boring pieces of garbage means pattern recognition kicks in and I avoid features.

As for the story, I did like it the first time around so I'm sure the cleaned up version is still good (assuming you didn't make any major changes in the cleanup). I just don't really reread stories in general, so I don't see any reason to read it again.

4863070
It's basically grammar stuff since I don't rewrite stuff that much based on rather subpar standards. I'll make adjustments though.

And while I totally understand that perspective so so much (most of my stuff fails) I've seen great stories on there too. So I can give recommendations.

D48

4863091
Yeah, that's what I figured. You always find more little mistakes looking at it again years later. That's just the way editing works.

Eh, I've just seen too many horror stories of great fics failing for absolutely moronic reasons (the "best" was a Lord of the Rings crossover getting rejected for mimicking Tolkien's writing style) to trust their judgement, and on the occasions a featured story has sounded good enough for me to try anyways I've always been seriously disappointed in spite of going in with restrained expectations. Also, it is true that there are a few great stories on there, but those generally got in back in 2011 before EQD went stupid and can keep getting automatic features for sequels as a result.

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You'd have no idea what some of the things I had other stories rejected for were. It was nuts.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349844/angujaktuat
Though, here's a story I had my filthy hands all over before EqD featured. So, before it was cool, I guess.

D48

4863114
Yeah, they're nuts, and frankly best ignored by the fanfiction community. This site has plenty of ways to show good stories, especially since people like me have the flexibility to advertise stories we think are particularly worthy of attention.

4863117
Most of my stuff slips under the radar, but if you like Sombra and All That Lingers, you'll probably like my regular stuff. There's a Sombra/Cadance friend duo in there, and they partly served as inspiration for All That Lingers.

D48

4863119
I'll take a look, but I don't have much time these days and there are always other priorities so no promises on when I'll get around to it.

Eh, not a fan of EQD, but it's a big name and a feature's a feature! Congrats Star!

Now, time to power through those 5000 words that have been sitting on my read later.

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