Need non mecha fan beta readers · 7:25pm Sep 12th, 2018
I'm doing a second draft of a short story. A lot of non-mecha fans where confused with the first draft because I wrote it without anticipating much confusion from those unfamiliar with the tropes of mecha. I'm attempting to make the second draft to be easier to understand for a general audience.
Mecha btw being giant piloted robots in war setting.
It's 4 pages long, 2318 words. Written with an omniscient narrator. PM me if interested.