Sep
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Rewriting Continued · 7:05pm Sep 24th, 2018
Hello again, everypony!
Since a rewrite-in-place doesn't automatically send chapter updates, I'm going through blog posts a little bit. I had one & two yesterday- and updated the existing post for the day rather than making another. Now, though...
Chapter three, read your fill. I think I did much better with Fluttershy's reaction/state this time- and made the Crusaders' situation a little less in-the-nick-of-time. Got a good amount done, at least- last half of the chapter is entirely new, with some ideas from the old but no words. That's about how I expect the rest of the rewrite to go: Basically, discard & replace.
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#chapter 3
