Can someone please review my review???

Okie so I've joined my college newspaper team and they've asked me to do book reviews so in short I just want somebody read the review I've written and let me know what they think

It's not due in until the new year so there's no massive rush, but it would be much appreciated just to have some feedback before my first publish

Thanks, Corn

PS: I probably won't get back to anyone tonight because I gotta go get some sleep, but if you drop me a message I should be able to get back to it tomorrow... Niiiiiight