I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.
With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.
As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.
By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.
I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.
5125448 5125452 Thank you. I will do my best to not disappoint. (I don't know if you saw in the comments, but I'm planning another story with Apple Bloom as the main character, so I'm trying to learn to write the southern accent because I know that it would be disappointing to not write it, even if it's rather hard)
5125476 I won't. It's just that, once the Rainbow Curse arc will be finished, I won't need to watch playthroughts to write the next games, which will give me time to start writing another story while I prepare for the sequel of this one.
Well done, my rival/friend. That is a privilege given only to the best stories. I consider that a true victory on your part, but that doesn't mean I'll forfeit our story duel. I'm still a hero, and heroes don't give up. 5125458
(I don't know if you saw in the comments, but I'm planning another story with Apple Bloom as the main character, so I'm trying to learn to write the southern accent because I know that it would be disappointing to not write it, even if it's rather hard)
Don't worry about the southern accent too much, but if you still want to try it, I suggest reading Kir B's story Kirby Planet Robobot: Equestrian Adventures. That story got Applejack's accent down perfectly. As for which series you want your sequel to be a crossover with, I insist on Super Mario. There aren't fancy magical powers or anything like that, just natural things like Fire Flowers, Super Leaves, and even turnips. Simple, like Apple Bloom's life on the farm.
5125780 I already read Kir B's story, it's his story that gave me the inspiration to start this one. But yeah, I should reread it and take note about Applejack's southern accent.
As for the sequel, there will be Super Mario, but remember, I also told that there would be Pokemon, and there was a comment where I talked about Megaman. I think that you can guess what kind of crossover the sequel will be.
5125836 Yep, but I think that it would be more exact to say that the sequel will be a crossover with a saga of games that is itself a multicrossover. I think you can easily guess which saga I'm talking about. In which game can we see at the same time Mario, Pokemon, and Megaman? Mmh... Maybe I should add some clues... Zelda? Metroïd? F-Zero? Castlevania? Metal Gear Solid? Sonic? Oh! I know! Look at the picture of your second story.
5125847 I love that game. If only I didn't have to pay to get a Nintendo Online membership (besides the 7-day free trial) or to get access to the DLC fighters such as the Hero... But it wouldn't have mattered that much anyway; with the free trial, I tried to compete with other players online, but the game said that due to my network's "weak connection," I couldn't compete online. Yet in Mario Kart 8 Deluxe, I was able to play with others to my heart's content.
Well Done! You've hit the big time!
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Congrats Lucar
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Thank you. I will do my best to not disappoint. (I don't know if you saw in the comments, but I'm planning another story with Apple Bloom as the main character, so I'm trying to learn to write the southern accent because I know that it would be disappointing to not write it, even if it's rather hard)
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Please don’t forget this story you still have at least 2 more games to go.
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I won't. It's just that, once the Rainbow Curse arc will be finished, I won't need to watch playthroughts to write the next games, which will give me time to start writing another story while I prepare for the sequel of this one.
I'm now pretty sure that the Featured Box runs on black magic.
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Sequel?
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Yep. There will be a sequel to Sweetie's story.
Well done, my rival/friend. That is a privilege given only to the best stories. I consider that a true victory on your part, but that doesn't mean I'll forfeit our story duel. I'm still a hero, and heroes don't give up.
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Don't worry about the southern accent too much, but if you still want to try it, I suggest reading Kir B's story Kirby Planet Robobot: Equestrian Adventures. That story got Applejack's accent down perfectly. As for which series you want your sequel to be a crossover with, I insist on Super Mario. There aren't fancy magical powers or anything like that, just natural things like Fire Flowers, Super Leaves, and even turnips. Simple, like Apple Bloom's life on the farm.
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I already read Kir B's story, it's his story that gave me the inspiration to start this one. But yeah, I should reread it and take note about Applejack's southern accent.
As for the sequel, there will be Super Mario, but remember, I also told that there would be Pokemon, and there was a comment where I talked about Megaman. I think that you can guess what kind of crossover the sequel will be.
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Wait, a multi-series crossover?! ...Actually, I shouldn't be that surprised, because that's kind of what my story is.
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Yep, but I think that it would be more exact to say that the sequel will be a crossover with a saga of games that is itself a multicrossover. I think you can easily guess which saga I'm talking about. In which game can we see at the same time Mario, Pokemon, and Megaman? Mmh... Maybe I should add some clues... Zelda? Metroïd? F-Zero? Castlevania? Metal Gear Solid? Sonic? Oh! I know! Look at the picture of your second story.
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I love that game. If only I didn't have to pay to get a Nintendo Online membership (besides the 7-day free trial) or to get access to the DLC fighters such as the Hero... But it wouldn't have mattered that much anyway; with the free trial, I tried to compete with other players online, but the game said that due to my network's "weak connection," I couldn't compete online. Yet in Mario Kart 8 Deluxe, I was able to play with others to my heart's content.
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Yeah. Nintendo has a very ***** online.