Feb
15th
2020
Fluttershy's Mansion · 6:25pm Feb 15th, 2020
Greetings and Salutations, my name is Wrex and this is my review. The story I'll be reviewing is an interesting one. It's called 'Fluttershy's Mansion 1, 2, and 3', a crossover between MLP and Luigi's Mansion. In this story, Fluttershy has to save her friends from ghosts. This storyline is definitely unique, just like the game it's based on. But, I'd say it's a great way for people to learn that even the most timid of people can show courage when it is needed. There are some grammatical errors and incorrect spelling, but other than that, it's pretty good. I give it a 9 out of 10.
Just a heads up, Fluttershy Mansion 3 is not even finish. I know, you are reviewing my stories after all. I haven't seen anyone else write one of their own. I do miss some spelling mistakes and try to fix them but I hate it when people telling me about my grammar. I know it bad and lucky it getting better, because I have some people tell they can read it now, but it so annoying when they mention it. I do plan on going back to work on Fluttershy Mansion 3, but I just can't bring myself to. And I plan on this even before I heard about a third Luigi Mansion game.
Anyways, thanks for reading my stories. And sorry about my grammar.
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It's ok. A 9 is still a good score.
I've seen the gmod version of Fluttershy's Mansion by Invertedshadow.
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Really?
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Really.
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Creepy