Updates · 4:55pm Jun 18th, 2020
Hey guys! I hope you all are doing well and taking take of yourselves!
I know most of you must be wondering when Chapter 21 will be published. Don't worry, you will see it! I'm currently working on it but it needs a lot of work done. I have wrote up different scenes for it but I don't think some will make the final cut. This one is a bit tricky but I'm getting there, I don't know fully when the chapter will be out so I'm really sorry if I've disappointed you! Please be patient! I really want to make this chapter a good one.
Also, Iâve been kinda wondering and I'm curious to know, what do you guys like most about my story? What would you say is your favourite part and what needs improvement? Is there anything you guys would like to see happen? For example, more scenes with Luna and Chrysalis? Sunset and Chrysalis? Or even Celestia and Sunset? If you do, let me know and I will try add to the story. I have a lot planned for the upcoming chapters and I hope you will all enjoy it! Thanks to all of you who have stayed this far, I really appreciate the support you've given me, anyway this is all I have to say.
Iâll see you all soon!
I really like how much of s bond Sunset has gotten with Luna
I like the bonding done with Sunset and Luna. Luna and Chrysalis cute scenes would be really sweet to read, but I think you should do whatever interactions fit best with what's going on in the story.
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Iâm glad that you enjoy Sunsetâs and Lunaâs bond. I think from now on they will become ever closer and Sunset will start to open up and trust Luna more, it may take some time for Sunset to fully relie on Luna but she will start to have more of a bond with her.
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Oh! Donât worry I definitely have a lot planned with Chrysalis and Luna. I have scenes planned with them for the next chapter that you might think is cute/fluffy scenes! I also wanted to explore more of their past so that will be in upcoming chapters too.
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that's great to hear since as much as I enjoy Sunset's bond with Princess Celestia tbt I think her bond with VP Luna might be stronger since they have a lot in common and I hope this doesn't piss anyone off. So sorry
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Oh, that's cool, I can't wait to see it!
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Donât apologise, youâre allowed your own opinion. To be honest, I do agree with you. Thatâs why I started to write this fic in the first place, donât get me wrong I love reading stories where Principal Celestia adopts Sunset, thereâs so many of them on here that are my all time favourites. Personally, I feel Luna could be a better mother to Sunset than Celestia, because Luna understands and has more in common with her so their both able to bounce off each other well, and bond easily. Their bond will definitely be stronger than the bond Sunset had with Princess Celestia and the difference with VP Luna, Sunset feels more open to her and she can express her feelings towards her which Luna does too. As you have seen in previous chapters Luna has basically poured her heart to Sunset. Though, the only problem is Sunset accepting and believing Luna. Right now she isnât in the best mental state so sheâll have a hard time dealing with things, but will come to terms with things when she realises all the care Luna has put in towards her. Youâll see more of that in the next chapter and Chrysalis too, her and Sunset will have more of stronger bond aswell. Anyway, sorry for rambling sometimes I canât help myself and I donât want to spoil anything for you.
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Right and yeah there ain't many stories of Luna and sunset and I can't wait to see more of what's to come
I love the idea of Sunset and Luna it makes more sense if you think about it Sunset shows uneasiness in regards to Celestia In Forgotten Friendship only going to her because she want's to get her friends back and Luna having regrets like her counter part helps Other good ideas that I want to do are after the Fall Formal she is hurt bad enough that Twilight has to taker back to Equestria to heal her wounds and she get taken in by either Twilight or the Zecora in Equestria I also wouldn't mind seeing her get taken in by the Human Pinkie or Human Rarity or Human Rainbow Dash.
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Yeah do think it does make more sense and you could tell that Sunset felt guilty towards Princess Celestia even before Forgotten Friendship whenever she came through the portal sheâd never go outside of Twilightâs castle. Even when she went through to get her new journal from Princess Twilight, she was still very unsure. I always wondered what it would've been like for Sunset if Princess Luna was around when Sunset lived in the castle, I can't help but think the two would've ended up good friends. Maybe even Luna could've prevented Sunset from leaving, who knows though. And I like the idea where Sunset has to get taken back through the portal to get her wounds healed. I feel like Princess Celestia would be the one to help Sunset out there, I'd reckon sheâd be the most worried too, like she was in the first EQG movies.