Anyone good at making kickass fight scenes with plenty of detail?

Hey guys it's me Sage, sorry about being quiet for the past week but between helping my granny with stuff and working on some other stuff not to mention just being a bit lazy I haven't really been working on chapter five for my story The Warrior in a Mare's World but today I feel motivated to work on it more. However, there is another reason why I haven't really been working on it and that's because I need some serious help with the upcoming fight scene for Chapter 5 with RonI and Motomeru duke it out in a spar against a senior member of the Harmony for All Guild.

I mentioned this at the end of Chap 4 but I'm not all that great at fight scenes, especially ones that need some great detail like the one I'm envisioning for chapter five. Sure the one with RonI and Motomeru vs The Timber Wolves was okay but I honestly want to do something that's more awesome and epic for this fight as I really wanna show what RonI can do, thus the point of this new thread.

So, as the title says, I'm making a call out to writers that know how to make very detailed fights to help both me and my buddy Necrom make this fight in the upcoming chapter five be as awesome as it can be. If you guys are interested in any way please comment down below or PM me and we'll talk more in detail or if you want you can recommend me a writer somewhere on the site and I'll PM them and ask for help personally.

Thank you for your time and I hope you all have a good safe day, peace!

Comments

[Kaveman_team128]

It depends on the fight scene.
Blades clashing are a little easier than casting spells.

Yes I'm a bit behind on the chapters

[Sage the Ero Harem Kami]

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Its gonna be weapons clashing and spells flying my friend

[Kaveman_team128]

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Let me catch up on the story real quick

[Sage the Ero Harem Kami]

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Ok

[Fluffy-Boi]

I can't write battle scenes. But I can suggest badass music for them. If you need music suggestions. I am your man.

[Sage the Ero Harem Kami]

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OK then

[Tomislavj5]

I am more than welcome to help you with the fighting scenes. Since I roleplayed for a long time, fight scenes were taking the most parts of the rp so if you don't mind, I can help you with it. Just reply back if your interested

[Sage the Ero Harem Kami]

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That would be great, is it alright I PM you later with more details? I have to God and do stuff with my Granny now.

[Tomislavj5]

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Of course. I shall be waiting

[Fluffy-Boi]

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Cool. I got 4 themes for you

[Sage the Ero Harem Kami]

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Thanks for the choices

[Fluffy-Boi]

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No problem pal. Can't wait for the next chapter.. but I will lol

[KukriRyuTsukino]

Depends on the style of combat (blades, magic, fists) involved.

[Shadowblade019]

Go watch a real fighting video of all styles, than mix them up with one video that involves magic in a way. You don't have to go straight epic right away, just give a bit of a taste, and save the epicness for a bigger chapter.

[The REAL Seth Standmore]

I Seth Standmore am a highly skilled and experienced writer who has been writing fight scenes for my fanfic's for quite some time these include, fight scene's between one person and lots of people as well as fight scene's between one person and one other person, or should I say one person and one monster, we have similar writing style's i think we both focus on sword's men clash ing with there enemy's i would be Honored to write your fight scene's or else help you write them

here is a Sample fight scene I have written just now to prove that I am a good fight scene writer, it is a hypodermical fight scene between a powerful anthro pony alicorn Twilight Sparkle and a rhinoserous who is a practitioner of rhinojitsu which is ninja fighting for rhinos

Twilights pov (point of view)

"Haaaaaaaaa!" I said as I ran at the rhininja. I spun around as I approached him whirling faster and faster like the spinning blades of a blender. My foot looked like a red streak of blood in the air from the outside, so fast was i moving. "Tornado style alicorn foot assault!" MY foot crashed into the rhininja with great power and smashed his horn off of his face, he fell on the ground quibbling and crying tears out from his grey orbs. But he got up with the broken horn in his hand and grinning triumelephantly he stabbed the horn at me.

"Your mine, Princess Twilight Sparkle" he said, but the horn bounced off of my powerful iron knocker's which were size double P (authors note The P stands for Pinkie Pie Sized b ecause Pinkie Pie has the biggest knocker's but not the most powerful one's) and my knocker's giggled from the impact. "Hahahaha!" I laughed at him royally, "Havent you ever encountered a princess before, a horny fool like you is no mach for me!" Siezing his hand I twisted his elbow until his horm fell off, it landed on my foot and I bounced it up like a soccer player then, I head butted the horn so hard it flies into his eye, he was blinded in one eye!"

"My eye!" The rhininja gasped painfully. "I can never fire a bowinarro again!" The rhino moaned sadly.

I smirked. And said "Lets wrap this up!"

**INSERT SONG: BATTLE MUSIC FROM ONE PUNK MAN**

Drawing my fist it glowed bright purple, I grinned and said "Say your prayer's you fool! This will make you think twice befroe tangling with a princess again! Take this! Tezuka Osamu-San wa manga no kami-sama desu!" (Authors note That means Explosion Princess Blaster Fist) My fist exploded against his face, his rhino bones flew all over the place in little shards all over the place.

My hand smoking I said. "I guess your species just went extinct."

Well what do you think, just let me know

Edit sincerely seth standmore

[arandomboi12]

You need help? Ok, bet. I'll help ya free of charge! DM me!

[Golden Fang Ryu Shenron]

I've been doing some self-training on fight scenes, not like those in real life but in things like anime and wildlife and such. Still, if you need help with scenes like that, then I can lend a helping hand.

[Dylan_exe]

Is the story dead or have you just lost motivation because it would be better for everyone if you updated them about the story instead of giving false hope.

[arandomboi12]

I suddenly, have the time.