The problem(s) with Odium · 6:51pm Nov 28th, 2020
This is the last time I ask this, so I won't bother anyone again (Sorry if I still am, though). What could be the problem or problems with my OC antagonist named Odium? Is it his personality, his backstory, his appearance, his concept, or even his existence in general? Please let me know so that I can fix both him and his story in general.
Thank you and have a great day.
Existence in general. That includes everything about him that you mentioned as well. The only thing I feel that would help him, is to erase him from existence and start over on a brand new character.
There's a reason characters like Odium aren't common. Making a foil for the Mane 7, and the heroes for any franchise, is hard enough for professional writters. Let alone fanfic writers.
Odium never clicked on any level as worth time and effort to keep coming back to see more of it.