EqG:StH Volume II Preview #4 · 11:42pm May 8th, 2021
Another preview for anyone looking forward to Volume II of EqG:StH:
Tempest Shadow has been driving on a highway for several hours now. After she xxxxxxxx xxx xxx, she refused to make any more stops unless it's for gas, until she located those fugitive teens. Unfortunately for her, her search remained fruitless, most likely that they are well ahead by now after their getaway. In hindsight, using her partner’s junk of a car probably wasn’t the best choice for chasing after a bus, but she doesn’t have any other options. She refused to quit, and she refused to let her xxxxxxxxx down.
Suddenly, she heard a loud "boom", causing her whole car to shake. Tempest immediately slammed the breaks and checked out in alarm.
"Wha– what the heck was that!?" she loudly exclaimed.
The shakiness of her car and the road subsided shortly afterward. She assumed it was a sudden earthquake until she spotted something strange and out of place xxxxx xx xx xxx xxx.
"Is that… x xxxxxxx xxxx?" she muttered.
She thought she was seeing things due to fatigue from hours of driving. But lull and behold, there was a xxxxxxxxxxxx xxxx right up in the xxx, despite that it was xxxxxxxxx. Something like that shouldn't be possible.
Then, her mind clicked. There was only one possibility of what could've caused this strange phenomenon, and there was no doubt that her hunch was right.
Determined and with a new destination in mind, Tempest went back to her seat, turned on the engine of her car again, and drove towards the direction of the xxxxxxx xxx.
Nice…Although are the x’s really necessary
Certainly another interesting preview. :) Looking forward to it. :D
Okay seriously, great but really was the x's really necessary for the story
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It's only a precaution for the sake of spoilers. You didn't think I would leave any crucial parts that easily in the preview, do you?
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Sure but what’s the point of a “preview” ifs it’s choppy and incomplete??
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The point is, if I leave any of these certain words, it would give away the surprise prematurely, which affects the overall story. I'm still showing you snippets of the upcoming volume, but not completely. Which is why it's "choppy" and "incomplete".
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Well i guess your just having fun and i can respect that
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well, i disagree on preference, but do your thing.
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We understand and like Rarity said “No spoilers!”