Sequel announcement and editing

I've had a sequel planned for this story for a long while now and I've kind of set it on the back burner for now in favor of SNST because I'm not happy with the "inciting indecent" for the sequel and how everything goes down.

I also wanted to refamiliarize myself with how I wrote Sunset and Sunburst's relationship and why they would be at each others' throats. So, I started rereading it. Boy, did I feel a sense of cringe and nostalgia at the same time. The worst part about it, was that I would say "woman" instead of "mare" when referring to these anthropomorphized ponies. This set off whatever OCD I have way hard and I just couldn't let such offense slide, I have so much pride in this story. So, as I read through this again to help me get in the mindset for writing the sequel and also going to correct any and all glaringly stupid mistakes I find, especially in the early chapters. (This may take me a while as my dog just had to get a biopsy for a lump on his face and the bleeding just won't stop and I really want to take good care of him as I have been told that this lump had been there since last thanksgiving. I feel super guilty about it.)

In the meantime, if any of you would like to, you could reread this yourself and perhaps give me a summary (and speculations) on Sunset and Sunburst's relationship as I have depicted. This is something that would simply be nice, I offer no prizes or anything except my gratitude for seeing things that I have either forgotten or did not see.