Twilight comes across a certain blue planet just ripe for her friendship, but something seems off about this world. She and her friends start to grow bigger and bigger. Starlight Glimmer in particular seems to be gone totally insane.
Just think about it, you and a couple of friends are watching classic South Park or something edgy. And then, some person comes who's not even a fan of it, demands changes (censorship) or outright turns off the program. Just why do people do this? Why do they ruin everyone's fun?
Seriously, they are. This is by far the most important issue, if they made their asses fatter it would improve viewership. If they made the ponies thicc prudes would complain, which would only draw in even more viewers. Twilight Sparkle, the protagonist of the series has a fat ass, and her teacher Princess Celestia, who's ass is even fatter.
The main reason is uncanny valley. When something looks human but not quite. A perfect example would be a robot trying to mimic being human, it looks unsettling. It's somewhat insulting towards the ponies, you have Twilight Sparkle there a beautiful unicorn and you can't embrace her just because she's not fully in human shape, even though she has all the qualifications to be a sapient-minded
5534665 Well, it depends on the story. Breaking your very long story into small chapters is generally a good idea. Not too short. But something like 5k is okay enough. Or even 2k or 3k.
17K words in one chapter
That’s the most in one chapter I’ve seen since Manehatten Memories
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Can't have any breaks from the insane growth in the story.
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Damn.
The highest count in one chapter I got is 3.1K
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Making ponies grow bigger and bigger adds a lot to the word count. If your story needs extra words. XD
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I’m gonna get bigger tho. I plan a one chapter story to be 5K or more
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Well, it depends on the story. Breaking your very long story into small chapters is generally a good idea. Not too short. But something like 5k is okay enough. Or even 2k or 3k.
1k is too short. Most of the time.
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I’ll try to keep that in mind
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At least it's not like whatmustido's chapters, with an average of 20k per chapter.
In other news, it was fun to edit/proofread it.
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Yeah. Thanks again for your help.
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No problem, my dude. I'm up for whatever comes my way.