I have realized my grammar isn't that great and would need some help. the story is a dark/adventure with the entire cast being human including a couple of Ocs. The entire story will be focused on the OCs and is told in 1st person POV while an all out war between the griffons and changelings is beginning to start after recent a couple failed attempts in taking Canterlot.
So, can someone please correct my grammar and give me tips to improve?
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