After burning out on a story and realizing I was getting nowhere trying to write something that wasn't working for me I've started up a new story that I would love some feedback on.

If you like adventure/mystery stories, come check ot out!

TBenath the Plains of Mustangia

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama
• Mystery

The ponies of Mustangia live outside like wild animals. They eat grass off the ground like cattle and bathe in the river. Separate from the world, trapped in the past.

• Twilight
• Applejack
• OC
• Other

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What story do you have planned for when you get burned out on this one?