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TManehatten Noire: Fang and Nazca
MLP: FiM
Kamen Rider
Romance
Adventure
Mystery
Manehatten, a crime and filth-ridden city. It's always been that way, at least for one Philip Finder, a hardboiled detective and PI for hire. A slash of serial killings, victims frozen alive by a monster called a Dopant. And now a mysterious woman...
Narcotics
Sex
Violence
Profanity
Anthro
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Prince Blueblood
OC
Daring Do
Saffron Masala
The Bricklayer · 43k words · 14 9 · 709 views
TGreen and Friends - Prologue - The Origin
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Random
Green Thunder's crazy journey begins.
Alt. Universe
Crossover
Spike
OC
Main 6
CMCs
Starlight Glimmer
blaa6 · 3.8k words · 985 views
TSumnambula
Equestria Girls
Romance
Drama
Slice of Life
Sunset Shimmer, a refugee of Equestria, personal consort of one Queen Somnambula. But now, it's up to Somnambula to take on the hardest challenge she's ever faced. Her country, or her love?
Sex
Alt. Universe
Sunset Shimmer
Somnambula
Flash Magnus
The Bricklayer · 4k words · 102 8 · 3.6k views
TThe Hybrid
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Tragedy
His mother died because her people invade, his father was imprisoned because he love and he was left alone.
Violence
Gore
Death
Celestia
OC
Main 6
Chrysalis
Changelings
red reaper · 14k words · 19 31 · 1.2k views
TFabricated Existence
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
Learn the mysterious origins of Pinkie's third eldest sister. Maud Pie, a pony of few words but indomitable spirit.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Pinkie
Maud Pie
Unknown Ficwriter · 3.2k words · 10 0 · 526 views
ELean on Me
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Applejack needed to run. She needed to get away from him.
Applejack
Fancypants
Tranquil Serenity · 1.6k words · 31 2 · 1.5k views
TThe Life of the Alicorn Sisters
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Tragedy
This is the story about the lives of the three alicorn sisters and how they ended up driving apart.
Celestia
Luna
OC
Other
Rakoon1 · 21k words · 1.8k views
TAmbiguous
MLP: FiM
Sad
A lone stallion sits in a bar.
OC
Octavia
Someone Somewhere · 1.6k words · 301 views
ECapt. Mommy
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
A story of Spitfire's Life with her daughter.
Spitfire
OC
Comrade Bagel Muffin · 1.1k words · 33 2 · 1.5k views
EWhy me?
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Random
I just want to go home.
Human
Alt. Universe
OC
Main 6
CMCs
Miner · 71k words · 73 24 · 4.2k views
TThrough it all and Beyond
MLP: FiM
Ben 10
Romance
Adventure
Comedy
Ben Tennyson finds himself stranded on an alien world unknown to him run by Technicolor Ponies. What could possibly go wrong?
Crossover
Human
Celestia
Luna
Main 6
ParaNomaly · 18k words · 275 11 · 7.2k views
TNew Horizons
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Sci-Fi
When Earth is no more, what measures will humanity take to ensure their survival?
Sex
Human
Celestia
Luna
Main 6
King Sombra
Tirek
ParaNomaly · 6.5k words · 104 12 · 2.6k views
TGilded Sunburst
Equestria Girls
Romance
Slice of Life
Mismatched couple Gilda and Sunburst deal with love, life, friends, and everything in between
Gilda
Sunburst
MJP · 5.4k words · 20 5 · 883 views
ENature bites back...
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
The day had started out so well, shelter was found and even prey. Life was looking up for her pack in this new home in the wild untamed Everfree Forest. That was until ponies discovered their presence. Time to show them who owned the forest.
Fluttershy
Prince Blueblood
OC
Griffons
Wendy A Crescent · 4.4k words · 37 4 · 1.1k views
EThe Legend of El Silbón
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Mystery
Thriller
In the far reaches of Equestria, in the lands where the crown reaches the less, there are stories of beings beyond our comprehension and how they haunt the towns on this region. This is the story of how a pony encountered one of this beings.
OC
Other
Time Reaper · 8.2k words · 18 2 · 908 views
TPoison Whiskey
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
Rainbow is Scootaloo's real mother. First problem, she doesn't know that. Second problem, Scootaloo's living in an abusive household after Rainbow gave her up for adoption fearing of what kind of mother she'd be. But now it's time to face her demons.
Narcotics
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Fluttershy
Rainbow Dash
Scootaloo
The Bricklayer · 51k words · 121 21 · 5.2k views
TEquestria girls Hell rider
Equestria Girls
Romance
Dark
Mystery
Sci-Fi
Something is coming to canter lot city, something with a lust for vengeance..
Gore
OC
Chrysalis
Sunset Shimmer
Rainbow Dash (EqG)
Main 7 (EqG)
Tunefulsubset72 · 68k words · 165 19 · 7.6k views
ESay You'll Stay
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Fluttershy needs some comfort.
Fluttershy
Discord
fluttercordlover232 · 1.6k words · 65 12 · 4.3k views
EIs He Really A Savage?
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Sad
What would happen if Discord got shot with Nighthowler serum?
Crossover
Fluttershy
Discord
fluttercordlover232 · 6.4k words · 54 16 · 2.9k views
ENight's comfort
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
A sobbing student knocks at her teacher's door at night. Ultimately, both the student and the mentor will find comfort.
Twilight
Celestia
Fedairkid · 2k words · 57 1 · 3.6k views
EFear of Big Scary Bears
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Flurry Heart has an inner monologue about her fear of disappointing or angering her Aunt Twilight
Flurry Heart
twilightsparkle3562 · 1000 words · 54 7 · 3.4k views
EEquestria's Imperfections
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Drama
Mystery
Discord is sick, but this is not your average illness; whatever this is, it's slowly taking Discord's magic away, and his immortality.
Fluttershy
Zecora
OC
Discord
Main 6
fluttercordlover232 · 13k words · 43 12 · 3.1k views
TMaster Of Order And Balance
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Comedy
Tragedy
This is a little look into the stallion that leads the Order of Balance and what makes him who he is.
OC
Other
grey mane · 9.7k words · 16 2 · 362 views
TMemoirs of a Thief
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Comedy
Tragedy
One thousand years ago the Legendary Thief vanished from the world, and now he has returned to continue doing what he has always done. But for what reason did he have for leaving, and why now after all these years has he returned?
Gore
Luna
OC
Other
Main 6
grey mane · 176k words · 35 10 · 1.3k views

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