I have decided to stop writing for Fimfiction Submission and put the first Chapter Of "Sunset Do-Over her Whole Life" on to Wattpad so if you want to check it out the link down below and it sees future chapters early I have them on my Patreon under the second link
https://www.wattpad.com/1440908759-sunset-do-over-her-whole-life-the-start-of-whole
https://www.patreon.com/TravisHannameyer

7961858 Best of luck, but uh... you really need to edit, my friend. That stuff is unreadable without formatting.

7961864
I think English, is not their first language?

7961866 Neither is it mine. Plus, that doesn't change the fact that it's a wall of text. If he wants people to read his story, which might be very good for all we know, he still needs to edit it to a readable format.

Geez!
Can we say "wall of text" much?!
I couldn't even get past the first part of that!

7961858
Seems someone needs to study up on the rules of writing and formatting..