Please read and comment on my story: Missed Stop, Monstrous Meeting.

EMissed Stop, Monstrous Meeting

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Comedy
• Drama

You wake up from your nap to discover that you missed your train stop. Now you are on a ride to the Crystal Empire. Fortunately, there is somepony here to keep you company.

• Alt. Universe
• Second Person
• OC
• Coconut Cream

Robipony · 6.2k words  ·  201  3 · 2.8k views

It is a second person story where you are a unicorn stallion who is stuck on a train but makes a new friend along the way.

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