I'm waiting for confirmation from our shadowy moderator overlords. And the pizza place doesn't open 'til 11:00....

Anypony have a one shot that needs a critique?

3311484 I have so many one shots that I can't publish yet because they haven't been critiqued enough yet. I will publish the stories when the editing reaches 100%. Self editing can only get me to about 20%, then I need the help of somepony else. I am blind to my own mistakes.

The stories are all public Google Doc, so anypony can just drop on them and write comments on anything and everything. Please be harsh.

Here are the links:
I Ain’t Your Sacrifice! (one shot)
Current state of completion: 100%
Editing: 73% <— Help me polish this and I’ll publish it.

Forget Love (one shot)
Current state of completion: 100%
Editing: 46% <— Don’t forget to leave your criticism about this story in the comments.

Flash Sentry Is Not a Hero (one shot)
Current state of completion: 100%
Editing: 42% <— Be a hero and help me edit this story so I can publish it.

Rape Is Bad and You Should Feel Bad! (one shot)
Current state of completion: 100%
Editing: 22% <— Anypony can help me edit this so I can publish it.

Discords Sits on Celestia’s Throne (one shot)
Current state of completion: 100%
Editing: 0% <— There seems to be some chaos influence in this story. Can you help me clean it up so I can I can publish it?