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EWhat Does Music Really Mean?
In Canterlot City, Twilight and her friends work in a retirement home for musicians. And over time, they discover what the true meaning of music is about.
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Please let me know what you think.

7634146 I'd change 'In Canterlot City' to 'In the city of Canterlot'. Or better yet, just 'In Canterlot'.

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Why should i?

I want keep it the way it is

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