Hello, folks! SunlightRays here, and I have a story that I would like to have it reviewed.

The link can be found here. Please take a look and let me know what you think! Criticism and advice are always welcome.

P.S. If you have opinions about the story, let me know what you think in the comments.

Warning: Contains content related to suicide/self-harm. Reader discretion is advised as the story progresses.

Sorry but I don't want to read your story because of the suicide tag. I don't like stories that have that in them.

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Ah well, too bad. Should have put up a warning up in the post. Better go do that now.