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True, this had good humor.

But, it had another great thing in it that deserves mentioning, and that was the mare/woman: Holy hell, that confidence and sass. It's that kind of clever and strong girl that you would love spending time with, and one that confident men would put their knee on the ground for. Wouldn't you agree?

Should it have a sex tag? Honestly, it could, but I think it works better without one. This is pretty much what I imagined a Mature + Slice-of-Life story would be all about. I doubt it will confuse anyone, and I personally think that the less tags you have the better, so I'd even remove the random tag.

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