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What the hay's an ApplePear! by TheMajorTechie

Pros:
Coloured line for a certain party pony, fits.
Pinky being Pinky, nicely done.

Cons:
Weird writing style.
Handdguns in a pony story?

Summary:
Another random story by this author. Random want to be funny scenes sticked together to make a 'story'. In opposite to his last story (Luna Needs Moneyz for dem Vidya Gaems!) which had it moments, this was just focused on beeing random and not funny anymore.

The main idea is clear, Applejack versus a 'pear tree', so far so good, but what follows is just randomly stuff that seems to fit for the authors ideas. There is a vargue storyline, still, the whole thing is more or less nonsense suposed to be funny.

Rating:
5/10

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