EFellowship is Miraculous

• MLP: FiM
• Slice of Life

A new pony arrives in Ponyville, armed with the truth. How will the others take it?

• Spike
• Celestia
• Trixie
• OC
• Main 6

Praynfaith96 · 22k words  ·  13  3 · 543 views

Review: Fellowship is Miraculous 

Tags: [Slice of Life] 100%

Summary: This takes place before Twilight becomes a princess.  This story is about the god and the bible.

Analysis: If you're into religious fictions then this is a story for you.  It is a very interesting read when you put both lore of pony and real life religion. It's pretty cool to make a cross over.

Critic analysis chart:

Chapters               Interesting  /   Idea     /   Flow  /  Grammar

Chapter one =              7/10          8/10         7/10        10/10

Chapter two  =               7/10          8/10       7/10           8/10

Chapter three =              7/10           7/10        8/10       9/10

Chapter four =                8/10            7/10        8/10     9.5/10

Chapter five =              8/10              7/10        8/10      9.5/10

Chapter six  =               8/10              7/10        7/10        9/10

Chapter seven =         8/10                 7/10       7/10       9/10

Chapter eight =            7/10                 8/10        8/10       8/10

Chapter nine   =            6/10               7/10         6/10     10/10

Chapter ten   =             6/10                7/10          7/10     10/10

Chapter eleven =          6/10               6/10          7/10      9/10

Chapter twelve =          5/10                 6/10         6/10       8/10

Critic word format:   If you are religious you may say 10/10 because why not.  If you don't like religious things then you came in the wrong place and your score maybe at least a 3/10 because it is a bit boring.  There can be some slice of life where there is something good and not boring.

The final verdict for this fiction is at least a 6/10 for me.  The grammar is clearly almost there to perfection and it’s a well and understand fiction.  Sure it may have it’s ups and downs. But fiction is a fiction and it does well in the grammar tier.