If you have tips, the need of advice, or generally have knowledge to bestow that might benefit the writing of your fellows here in the rainbow madhouse of madness please post right ahead!

6630878 I have a lot of things I am going to post in this thread later.

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Just something that came to me one day

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Is this medieval Humanization? Making a story that is more like Tolkien-esq fantasy? Or are we talking more like Berserk? From what I can read I feel that this is humanized, and very medieval or at least Renaissance. Judging by the social customs and the lack of respect for Princess Luna's choices as an individual of course.

I am not a grammar expert, but I see no flaw in concept except for a minimalist style that doesn't add much in terms of atmosphere.

Though that line about Discord being more of a William Tell like figure interested me a bit.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/William_Tell

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Middle Ottoman Renaissance/Early Italian Renaissance. Very early guns if any and very few.