Bittersweet Victory is a story where Chrysalis returned earlier (Mid-season 4) and wins. The Mane Six and the Princesses (Except Cadance) are presumed dead and soon after all of Equestria falls under Changeling control. Here is the problem: Not only is victory boring but it turns out that most ponies don't really love it when someone kills their rulers and heroes. Oh, not to mention the Paperwork that comes with ruling Equestria.....And Tirek just returned. Great just great. Need help with descriptions.

7750899 Here's how I'd write the description:

Chrysalis takes over Equestria. Will she be a just queen and will her changelings befriend everypony?

Help us!

lol maybe the short one

7750899

What's the mood of the story? Is it comedy? Is it something more serious and/or dark? Because the description should reflect that.

7751011
Comedy Adventure

7751021

Hmm, how about something like:

Taking over Equestria? That's easy! Dealing with uprisings, magical creatures, and paperwork? That's hard! And Chrysalis is learning that the hard way.

OR

Chrysalis can deal with Princesses, she can deal with uprisings, she can even deal with Tirek, Discord, and other magical idiots. But paperwork always gets her. Sometimes she wonders if concurring Equestria was worth the stress.

The second one might fit a sequel