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TThe Malevolent Multiversal Misadventures of Mare (April Fools 2024 Special)
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Comedy
Random
Once upon a time, there was a random pony in Ponyville. When a villain shows up, this overpowered Mary Sue of a character must venture bëÿönd Extria im order to find thr Generic MacGuffin. Only then will she have a chef of defeating this boring villa
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Other
Bat Pony
Misty
Admiral Producer · 32k words · 17 2 · 140 views
EBlues Clues: Happy Easter Blue!
Equestria Girls
Comedy
Slice of Life
Spike, Inferno, Rarity and Sunset all need to play Blues Clues to figure what Blue's favorite thing to do for Easter!
Crossover
Human
Other
Sunset Shimmer
Rarity (EqG)
Spike (EqG)
Big Imagination E · 5k words · 6 8 · 151 views
TA Talk With A Bully
MLP: FiM
Mystery
Sad
Slice of Life
After the CMC come home with black eyes, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity take it upon themselves to find out what happened.
Narcotics
Violence
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Rainbow Dash
Applejack
Rarity
Diamond Tiara
CMCs
Artist · 3.5k words · 22 20 · 525 views
TA Letter Through Time
MLP: FiM
EaW
Mystery
Sci-Fi
Thriller
Twilight and Spike discover a letter that was written 20 years into the future. A price will be paid if they seek down the answers; one that they would not be ready to face.
Violence
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Spike
Other
Catpaw616 · 1.2k words · 10 0 · 255 views
ESugar Spoon: Heartbreak Helper
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Slice of Life
Sugar Spoon is called upon to help discover why one of Ponyville's strongest relationships has turned sour.
OC
Caramel
Carrot Top
Sugar Spoon · 1.7k words · 16 0 · 182 views
EMistletoe and a Little Help From Your Friends
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Romance
Comedy
Slice of Life
A research project with surprising results.
Applejack
Rarity
Sunset Shimmer
Applejack (EqG)
Rarity (EqG)
Dreadnought · 2.7k words · 17 0 · 425 views
EPonyville Kindergarten
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Comedy
Random
Slice of Life
Every character you know, every episode you remember, what if none of that happened. What if it all happened in a kindergarten class.
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
Other
Main 6
Visharo · 8.9k words · 82 6 · 1.2k views
EA Second Chance
MLP: FiM
MLP: Comic
MLP Gen 5
Romance
Drama
Slice of Life
Izzy invites Discord over for Hearth’s Warming dinner with her friends in Maretime Bay following his attempt to destroy magic. Discord remembers the last time he had a group of friends and is unsure if he is worthy of a second chance…
Alt. Universe
Fluttershy
Discord
Other
Izzy Moonbow
Mane 5
Admiral Producer · 9.5k words · 46 5 · 953 views
TStar Wars: The Trials of the Force (Part One)
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Star Wars
Adventure
Slice of Life
Tragedy
Silverstream’s Padawan is kidnapped and stolen from her in a heart-wrenching betrayal from within the Jedi Order. Silver vows revenge and embarks on a journey across the universe to save her….
Violence
Death
Profanity
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Other
Ocellus
Silverstream
Admiral Producer · 49k words · 19 5 · 546 views
TI Feel Sorry For You
MLP Gen 5
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
An alternate ending to “The Roots of All Evil Pt 2.” What if that confrontation between Misty and Opaline in Zephyr Heights went differently? What if Misty was able to break through Opaline’s stubbornness for a moment and actually reform her…?
Death
Alt. Universe
Pipp
Zipp
Opaline
Misty
Admiral Producer · 4.8k words · 66 4 · 2.1k views
EBlues Clues: A Christmas to Remember
Equestria Girls
Mystery
Random
Slice of Life
Rarity really wants to get Spike something special for Christmas. Time for Blues Clues!
Crossover
Human
Rarity
Spike
Other
Big Imagination E · 3.8k words · 5 8 · 338 views
TNot a prank
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Sad
What if the joke cookies weren't a prank and actually killed and turn the Ponyville citizens into cookie zombies.
Gore
Violence
Death
Rainbow Dash
Celestia
Main 6
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 3.6k words · 26 6 · 1.2k views
TRedeemed
MLP: FiM
MLP: Movie
MLP Gen 5
Dark
Adventure
Slice of Life
The long-anticipated clash has finally arrived. The world’s magic has been destroyed and all hope is gone. With the fate of Equestria hanging in delicate balance, Misty must lead her friends in their final confrontation against Opaline….
Gore
Violence
Suicide / Self Harm
Death
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Izzy Moonbow
Sunny Starscout
Mane 5
Opaline
Misty
Admiral Producer · 84k words · 26 5 · 1.7k views
EChild Of Wonder
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Sad
Slice of Life
It’s almost been 20 years since Applejack and Stevie got married, and now they are blessed with a beautiful daughter named Melody.
Alt. Universe
Zecora
OC
Main 6
CMCs
Cozy Glow
Artist · 16k words · 18 27 · 384 views
TTwilight Goes On Vacation
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Slice of Life
Twilight and her friends go on an adventure to visit the Crystal Empire, to get away from Royal duties for a bit.
Violence
Alt. Universe
Main 6
King Sombra
Flash Sentry
Flurry Heart
Artist · 2.5k words · 16 13 · 387 views
ETwilight Visits Flurry Heart.
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Slice of Life
It’s been 3 months since Twilight returned to the crystal empire after defeating king Sombra.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Flurry Heart
Artist · 1.5k words · 17 11 · 456 views
EIt’s A Wonderful Life
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Applejack and Stevie had been dating for a year, will they get married now??
Alt. Universe
DJ P0N-3
OC
Main 6
CMCs
Flurry Heart
Artist · 6.5k words · 25 21 · 318 views
E40 Years
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Mystery
A community collaboration of a tale that spawns across all generations of My Little Pony.
Alt. Universe
Crossover
Main 6
Grogar
Mane 5
bookhorse125 · 41k words · 72 3 · 1.4k views
TForgiven
MLP Gen 5
Dark
Sad
Slice of Life
As Opaline prepares to launch her invasion, Misty attempts to apologize for her deception and mend her broken friendship with Izzy Moonbow, the only pony who ever believed in her, but fears that it may be too late to repair their shattered bond…
Violence
Alt. Universe
Hitch Trailblazer
Izzy Moonbow
Sunny Starscout
Opaline
Misty
Admiral Producer · 6.3k words · 69 7 · 2.7k views
EMindscapers
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Random
The group must journey into Pinkie's mind in order to save her.
Pinkie
Zecora
Other
Main 6
Heroic412227 · 3.3k words · 16 1 · 632 views
TTo Equestria And Beyond (Rewrite In Progress)
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Comedy
A new friend joins Equestria and makes his mark
Gore
Violence
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
OC
Other
Cadance
NightFurySpeedey8156 · 593k words · 34 21 · 1.5k views
EThree Years Later
Equestria Girls
Adventure
Sad
Slice of Life
Three years after Paul's death life has gone back to normal, 2 new residents have arrived at the group home.
Alt. Universe
OC
Main 7 (EqG)
Artist · 3.6k words · 24 29 · 409 views
EWhat Does Music Really Mean?
Equestria Girls
Sad
Slice of Life
In Canterlot City, Twilight and her friends work in a retirement home for musicians. And over time, they discover what the true meaning of music is about.
Human
Spike
Other
Main 7 (EqG)
Artist · 3.4k words · 28 34 · 542 views
EHow Vinyl Scratch Met Stevie Wonder
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Slice of Life
Vinyl couldn’t come up with the right song, she needed to come up with a song for her platinum record that she was going to sell.
Alt. Universe
DJ P0N-3
OC
Octavia
CMCs
Artist · 11k words · 915 views

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